TremcladClock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Swell Collab 07]

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neato

[Madness Hell's Version]

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Yeah, sure, its ok. But Newgrounds doesn't really need any more "madness" tributes, try something else, you obviously have some animation skills.

[Kanye vs Dubya]

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Don't listen to the other guy, its not racist at all, its just stating the issues, the main issue being "George Bush doesn't care about black people". Good work, enjoy your spot on the front page.

[Whoooop2]

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The animation killed it, you really had a winner humour wise, but the bad animation and the abrupt ending really killed it, don't get discouraged if it gets blammed, but heres a few tips for your future animations;

Don't use the default settings for the radial tool to make blood effects, if you must use the radial tool, then mix your own colours.

Spend more time on your characters, make sure they have detail and shading, even if they're supposed to look poorly drawn, you have to put some subtle detail into them.

Use better backgrounds

If you're using the paint tool for shapes like the shit around the one guys face, then outline the shape with a slightly darker shade of that colour, using a thin outline.

Don't make abrupt endings like that, it makes it look like you didn't finish the cartoon.

PsychoMantis093435 responds:

I agree with everything you say. To be quite honest, I didn't spend a lot of time on it. The two things I put on newgrounds so far are not the greatest, but thats only because I only made these for fun. Right now, I'm investing my time in a much better cartoon. I mainly made this and the other one to relieve stress. (I'm working on a Christmas cartoon to show at a family gathering.) The animation backgrounds and everything else are much better in that, but I export them to avi's so the file size is way to big to post here.

[CC-Clock 1920's]

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leet.
Would have been better if it had SBC in it though :{

BoulderClock responds:

SBC Cleeshay, thanks though

[Star Wars Civil Wars EP 1]

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Really bad drawings, terrible voice quality, disjointed story line which crosses the action axis at multiple points, pretty damn average. Obviously some work went into making it, so yeah.

[DOUG FUNNY!]

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Interesting style, but when you're blending live action with animation, you should use a fixed camera, or else it looks pretty stupid.

[SwitchBladeTalk: Patriots]

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Most certainly swell.

SwitchBladeClock responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[chaos emeralds day v2]

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Aww mayun.. I wish I had a shotgun that fired rifle cartridges in super slow mo, at an angle, with the casing attached :(

Pretty good, nice to see the Lock Legion is still hanging together, but if you ask me, you guys are too serious, you need to make more spam and stupid shit designed to piss people off.

incative-account responds:

not for me thanks

[al yor eBaum r blong 2 us]

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Don't listen to the last reviewer, he's obviously an idiot that doesn't understand the eBaums world and Newgrounds relationship, bloody brilliant, 5!