TremcladClock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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leet
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PlexityMusic responds:

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[Whoooop2]

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The animation killed it, you really had a winner humour wise, but the bad animation and the abrupt ending really killed it, don't get discouraged if it gets blammed, but heres a few tips for your future animations;

Don't use the default settings for the radial tool to make blood effects, if you must use the radial tool, then mix your own colours.

Spend more time on your characters, make sure they have detail and shading, even if they're supposed to look poorly drawn, you have to put some subtle detail into them.

Use better backgrounds

If you're using the paint tool for shapes like the shit around the one guys face, then outline the shape with a slightly darker shade of that colour, using a thin outline.

Don't make abrupt endings like that, it makes it look like you didn't finish the cartoon.

PsychoMantis093435 responds:

I agree with everything you say. To be quite honest, I didn't spend a lot of time on it. The two things I put on newgrounds so far are not the greatest, but thats only because I only made these for fun. Right now, I'm investing my time in a much better cartoon. I mainly made this and the other one to relieve stress. (I'm working on a Christmas cartoon to show at a family gathering.) The animation backgrounds and everything else are much better in that, but I export them to avi's so the file size is way to big to post here.

[CC-Clock 1920's]

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leet.
Would have been better if it had SBC in it though :{

BoulderClock responds:

SBC Cleeshay, thanks though

[SwitchBladeTalk: Patriots]

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Most certainly swell.

SwitchBladeClock responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[chaos emeralds day v2]

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Aww mayun.. I wish I had a shotgun that fired rifle cartridges in super slow mo, at an angle, with the casing attached :(

Pretty good, nice to see the Lock Legion is still hanging together, but if you ask me, you guys are too serious, you need to make more spam and stupid shit designed to piss people off.

incative-account responds:

not for me thanks

[Stepy Akermanskie]

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Very nice, your mom sounds hawt.

Zielak responds:

thx TremcladClock

[Tale of a Broken Heart]

Awww :)

You must be a kind sweet girl :o

starfox188 responds:

*^___^* hehe... *blushiness* no one ever told me that before! *hugs you*

[Blobbles- ep. 5]

Blobbles isn't funny

Newgrounds already has one annoying character with a high voice that isn't funny, why do we need another one?

JonBro responds:

Uh, because people LIKE IT?! Besides, if you're referring to Foamy, then I, being perfectly truthful, only like the fanmail movies. That humor I loved, and this reflects, well, not TOO much on that humor, but makes it more appropriate for all audiences.

Thanks for the concern.

[Joey's Story ep. 2]

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Erm why do the bullets have casings attached to them?

Smoke-Tower responds:

umm... fuck i dont know....
i didnt really care for the casings who cares about casings....

fine in the next one ill make it realistic where the shell flys out and just the bullet goes ok?

FUCK WHO CARES!

-Justin :)
no one actualy pays that much attention to the bullets

[Fast n' Quik Thxgvng mvie]

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Pretty good.

funymony responds:

.... Indeed... *sips tea*